Monday, May 22, 2017
Wednesday, May 17, 2017
Wednesday, May 10, 2017
Friday, May 5, 2017
merger photo
1. Maybe I may not be still enough and i may cause blurriness in the photo.
2. A good place to shoot these pictures on campus may be somewhere with not a lot in the background to not distract from the photo, like a wall.
3. I could be in different poses instead 0f just standing still and i could stand up and down to create levels.
4. I could wear something that will contrast with the background so the background wouldn't be distracting.
2. A good place to shoot these pictures on campus may be somewhere with not a lot in the background to not distract from the photo, like a wall.
3. I could be in different poses instead 0f just standing still and i could stand up and down to create levels.
4. I could wear something that will contrast with the background so the background wouldn't be distracting.
Wednesday, April 26, 2017
Monday, April 24, 2017
sports portfolio evaluation
1.
a. Alyssa Schukar
b. The main focus was illness, mainly bulimia.
c. The beginning lacked emotion. The photographer could've gotten more personal. They didn't think there was enough variation.
d. The judges liked a picture of a guy in Haiti. The judges also liked a girl who fell off of of hurdles.
e. I liked the photographer, but her style felt distant and like everything was made up.
a. Anthony Souffle
b. the main focus was birds, more specifically, pelicans.
c. the judges didn't like the sad pictures. The judges also wanted to see the pelican get caught in a fishing line instead of all the sudden seeing them being taken care of. The judges saw mergers they did not like.
d. they think a water picture is nice. There is a football picture they say looks like it comes out of a professional camera.
e. The photographer lacked a little bit of creativity.
a. Daryl Peveto
b. The main focus was life in Peru.
c. The judges didn't like a lot of the pictures, they didn't have much else to say except for "next".
d. They didn't really talk about anything they liked in particular.
e. I thought the photographer was ok, but seemed a little dark with lighting and distant from reality.
a. Melissa Golden
b. The main focus was older people.
c. The judges said they've seen a lot of what was photographed.
d. There was a portfolio of an old man that the judges liked.
e. I thought the pictures were ok, not the best.
2.
a. The judges liked how it wasnt too staged, they also liked how it looked like the photographer was almost "in" one of the pictures.
b. I didnt personally like the pictures for the contemt because i dont like sports, but the photographer was a very good one and knows how to take pictures.
3.
a. The judges talked about all the profiles together and talked about what worked for them.
a. Alyssa Schukar
b. The main focus was illness, mainly bulimia.
c. The beginning lacked emotion. The photographer could've gotten more personal. They didn't think there was enough variation.
d. The judges liked a picture of a guy in Haiti. The judges also liked a girl who fell off of of hurdles.
e. I liked the photographer, but her style felt distant and like everything was made up.
a. Anthony Souffle
b. the main focus was birds, more specifically, pelicans.
c. the judges didn't like the sad pictures. The judges also wanted to see the pelican get caught in a fishing line instead of all the sudden seeing them being taken care of. The judges saw mergers they did not like.
d. they think a water picture is nice. There is a football picture they say looks like it comes out of a professional camera.
e. The photographer lacked a little bit of creativity.
a. Daryl Peveto
b. The main focus was life in Peru.
c. The judges didn't like a lot of the pictures, they didn't have much else to say except for "next".
d. They didn't really talk about anything they liked in particular.
e. I thought the photographer was ok, but seemed a little dark with lighting and distant from reality.
a. Melissa Golden
b. The main focus was older people.
c. The judges said they've seen a lot of what was photographed.
d. There was a portfolio of an old man that the judges liked.
e. I thought the pictures were ok, not the best.
2.
a. The judges liked how it wasnt too staged, they also liked how it looked like the photographer was almost "in" one of the pictures.
b. I didnt personally like the pictures for the contemt because i dont like sports, but the photographer was a very good one and knows how to take pictures.
3.
a. The judges talked about all the profiles together and talked about what worked for them.
Friday, April 21, 2017
opinions writing preview activity
1. Editorial
2. Immigration laws and how trump is taking them too far.
3.
4. This story talked about how even though trump is wanting to get immigrants out, AISD is trying to make everyone feel safe.
5. The writer was always saying that Trump is trying to get rid of immigrants.
6. There are no quotes.
7. This was in 3rd person.
1. Reagan Wallace
2. This story is about Betsy DeVos and how she isn't fit to be an advocate for schools.
3.
4. Even though DeVos is a bad representative, it will take a lot for her to be heard, and with everyone against her, she cant do much.
5. Reagan was always sure that DeVos is a bad representative.
6. There are no quotes.
7. Reagan wrote in 3rd person.
1. Ian Miller
2. this article is about saving the 2nd best tree in austin because it is dying, and how expensive it would be.
3.
4. Ian mentioned that some people may think it's too expensive and not worth it.
5. Ian fully supported his opinion the whole time and was never iffy.
6. There are no quotes.
7. Ian wrote in 1st person.
1. Jake Brien
2. This story is about how expensive college is getting and how they are raising their standards to be accepted.
3.
4. Jake talks about how people can go to ACC or any community college and get an education there then move on to a bigger college.
5. Jake was sure about colleges being expensive and having high standards, but still having options.
6. There are no quotes.
7. Jake wrote in 3rd person.
1. Abby Ong
2. This is about how physics is no longer required, but students should still take it, as it's important.
3.
4. Abby mentioned that some people may not see physics as important.
5. Abby was always very sure about people taking physics and how its important.
6. The quote "a science that deals with matter and energy and it's interactions" by Merriam Webster
7. Abby wrote in 1st person.
A. A hard news story is more factual and includes a lot more information. An opinion based story is, obviously, very opinion based and has what people think and not facts.
B.
C.
2. Immigration laws and how trump is taking them too far.
3.
4. This story talked about how even though trump is wanting to get immigrants out, AISD is trying to make everyone feel safe.
5. The writer was always saying that Trump is trying to get rid of immigrants.
6. There are no quotes.
7. This was in 3rd person.
1. Reagan Wallace
2. This story is about Betsy DeVos and how she isn't fit to be an advocate for schools.
3.
4. Even though DeVos is a bad representative, it will take a lot for her to be heard, and with everyone against her, she cant do much.
5. Reagan was always sure that DeVos is a bad representative.
6. There are no quotes.
7. Reagan wrote in 3rd person.
1. Ian Miller
2. this article is about saving the 2nd best tree in austin because it is dying, and how expensive it would be.
3.
4. Ian mentioned that some people may think it's too expensive and not worth it.
5. Ian fully supported his opinion the whole time and was never iffy.
6. There are no quotes.
7. Ian wrote in 1st person.
1. Jake Brien
2. This story is about how expensive college is getting and how they are raising their standards to be accepted.
3.
4. Jake talks about how people can go to ACC or any community college and get an education there then move on to a bigger college.
5. Jake was sure about colleges being expensive and having high standards, but still having options.
6. There are no quotes.
7. Jake wrote in 3rd person.
1. Abby Ong
2. This is about how physics is no longer required, but students should still take it, as it's important.
3.
4. Abby mentioned that some people may not see physics as important.
5. Abby was always very sure about people taking physics and how its important.
6. The quote "a science that deals with matter and energy and it's interactions" by Merriam Webster
7. Abby wrote in 1st person.
A. A hard news story is more factual and includes a lot more information. An opinion based story is, obviously, very opinion based and has what people think and not facts.
B.
C.
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